chane writing

It was a dark night without any light...

It was a dark night without any light in the park and I was listening to music by myself. Suddenly, a man came and sat by me. We talked about the park, and i was explaining about it to him. Though, suddenly he tried to kidnap me, so I ran.  I kept running until I couldn't see any light. About 10-20 minutes later, I reached a door. The door was shinning and I was curious about the door. So I opened it and on the other side of the door, there was a snack world! There were cookie houses, chocolate lake, jelly bean boats and candy forests. there were so many things that was very interesting. I wanted to taste them, but I thought of Charlie and the chocolate factory story and Hantsel and Gretsel. Then I relaxed I was chased by the man I stopped hesitating about if I should taste the snack though it was very tempting. Oh my gosh! Someone pushed me into the chocolate lake! Help me!.... What? I can breath now, and I think I kind of see a hole. I saw a subway inside the hole. It was subway station! I swam to the station. Luckily, there was a subway, so I rode it. But I didn't know where it was going, so I ran to the front of the door and opened the room which controls the subway. There was a man who was driving the subway so I asked him about where it is going. He said, "We're going to the chocolate factory." So I asked him, "Isn't this the chocolate factory?" But he said, "What's wrong with you? It looks like you have lived here for a long time? We are just going to a town named chocolate factory. Isn't real chocolate factory is only for the fairy tales? This right here is Saskatoon, Canada." I was so surprised, because my house is in Saskatoon, and I wanted to go to home, but now, I am on this weird person's subway, and going to Chocolate factory? No! I have to go back! I asked him," Do you know how to go back to Saskatoon? But he said," Where are you wanting to go?" I answered, "I want to go to my house". Suddenly, the subway turned into an airplane and flew to somewhere. I asked him," Where are we going?" and he said,"Your home". I was really happy. The airplane flew as fast as it could, and it arrived in front of my house. Before I could say thanks to him, he flew away. I was wondering why he was so nice to my, and went into my house. There was my mother tied up at the middle of my house, and 3men wearing red cloths. Usually, if you look at movies, mothers says "NO!" to children to save them from danger, but for me, my mother said,"Come on! Come and help me!, I was scared, so I went to cut the rope. The men came to catch me as well while my mom was so happy that I got caught in too. A man grabbed my arm and said,"Why are you talking in sleep?" I looked up. I was my mother holding me. "Why are you sweating so much? You must have had bad dream last night."