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Joseph Kony |
First of all, African children will be in more danger. If we say that Joseph is bad to the all world, he could be mad at the children he kidnapped (because he could think this happened because of Jacob and the other children) and try to kill some children and kidnap more children to prepare for the expected battle with government.
In addition to that, the reason why they did the bad things could be to become famous. If he did all those bad things in Africa, he would have guessed that he will become famous. If we make him famous like Bill Gates, or other great man like Obama, or Lee Myeong Park, it is like getting him awards like those successful people. He could be happy to achieve his goals.
Lastly, he could hide or escape. If there are so many people who know about the 'Kony 2012' videos now since Kony's organization is also able to get on Internet, he will know about it too. He is hiding and commanding his people even now, and if we try to make him famous for long time, he will have time to find a better place to hide and this would just make harder to arrest him.
First, netizens can help catching Kony. However, even though netizens can learn from video and get impact, netizens will be worried to put themselves into those big risks. Also, netizens don't live where Kony is hiding, so they will not be able to give controversial help to catch Kony.
Not only that, the organization can get donations from netizens and many organizations.However, 1/3 of them is used to create new videos, and also many of them is used to maintain the organizations. Also, as you can think of there are not many that we can help to arrest Kony with money. By that, you can think that The organization is earning lots of money.
My opinion is that they should not make Kony famous for following reasons ; children could be in more danger, Kony wants to be famous, and he could escape. The opposition to my idea had following reasons ; netizens can help catching Kony, and organizations can get donations from netizens. I think it is not good idea to just inform people about what he did, but not make him famous.
Great job on presenting your argument. The essay is well-written with good arguments and videos/pictures to support your ideas.
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Thanks Ms.Angela!!
DeleteGood job! However, I cannot agree with you. Let's talk about it later. - Uncle -
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ReplyDeleteHi, your writing TA Sohyeon here. Great job with organization and allocation of ideas. Your essay was concise and impressive. I can't agree on your point that making Kony famous will make it easier for him to hide. The police does not post 'WANTED' posters for nothing. Other points, like how we are actually doing what he wants by making him famous, or how he will start gathering even more children are controversial but arguable. Think about the fact that children are dying, though. Is it OK not to do anything? I'm raising these questions because I think you would have the capability to think about them seriouly.
ReplyDeleteThere are some grammatical errors that need correction. If you want them modified, please see me in e111. :)